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![]() Abandoned Witch here.
It is my collection of poems about Arete, and other things as well. I've used to write poems since I was young. Here are some of them. Oh lovely Arete Oh my dearie, my Arete I'll never leave you forever You are so precious to me How I wish you are so known to see. You are so very pretty You are so very lovely I wish you were here holding a crystal ball I finally have seen you with Fifth once and for all. Now on to the real poems I wrote. My own point of view of Arete Arete's hair is dyed in red so fair So deep it covered only her hair Then she kept her things in a box that she knows everything. Her hair is so very long It doesn't really hurt She wears a witchdress with a frilled skirt Her friends wanted to meet her I'll give her flowers to offer. Months passed, and nobody liked until Fifth, which turns out right, became her lover and friend and her love story doesn't end. She had a loving heart and knows where love and relationship starts As this ends, I'll say one more thing With all my heart I'll give my friends my everything.
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![]() You're a very talented poet, AW. Keep up the good work! I'd like to see your works in other themes as well.
EDIT: I mean, I want to see more poems about staff members
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![]() loooooooooooooooooooool
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![]() kinda odd and somewhat disturbing. I'm not only talking about the Llama.
my guess: Abandoned Witch -> another fat, naked and not to forget hairy man in front of a computer xD |
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![]() Aaaw come on, don't be cruel.
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![]() ok, I have to admit that this statement wasn't very emphatic of me.
sorry for that (and the mental picture). I like following lines: "As this ends, I'll say one more thing With all my heart I'll give my friends my everything." A very compassionate ending. But I'm also a bit worried from a psychological pov. Nonetheless, as someone who also writes, I say: Artistic expression FTW! |
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![]() At least he (?) drew some attention. And that's not that easy, you know. I strongly encourage AW to write more poems.
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![]() I have waited a long time posting in this Arete-themed poems thread, so here's a new one:
Why I always adore Arete I had waited a long time following you and I know your grace is true I was once only a dreamer but someone earned me respect to become better. My dearie Arete, my loving dame princess of red I am following you since I joined the site Why I am so touched by your love, I'll leave my worries I wont say any words to describe your love, honor and glory Once in my life I'd never wait for forever to see you Hy heart is all that I know to get to know you're fine All the times you're with Fifth remind me of my true love and the times that we were friends that never broken once. I wish you were a symbol of truth that will never change till the end of our route Becoming an ambitious girl has more to know everything has a way to really start something. Our future will rise when you tie your hair We have a choice to make it fair The end is totally near when I see anyone I give my friends my Witchy Stardust! ~End~
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