i agree with wael, that the story reminds me a little bit of norse mythology.
but there's nothing wrong about it! you formed you very special interpretation
of this and as such i really enjoyed it!
so far, it's a basis for something that could grow quite huge. and as you seem
to be motivated i've no doubt that you will soon present some more details about
your mystical world. at least, i would be very fond of reading how this world is
developing...
let you fantasy flow, punch!
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