The Before "J" part of the Bible was made in a similiar way,
Someone got an idea, And what a success it was...
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The story, (The Beginning of it - The creation of world)
Reminds me of some mythologies, (e.g.
Norse Mythology, Creation of the world)
But is not a clone as such, and differs from it in a sufficient amount,
And as a beginning to a new world, Itīs not a bad one /-
Also,
you are somewhat youngish,
(meaning only good, since you begin to develop your skills (which are already above sufficient) in an early age)
And have time to spend to the world, it has potential -
And also if you manage constantly manage & evolve your world,
History & stories,
It would certainly deserve attention from people -
If you keep your enthuatism to it,
keep posting
k: /-