Hey dude, I composed some music for your cool lyrics, it's a ballad (or at least I think it is) with symphonic orchestra and pads. It's not complete though, but I though I show it to you first, and if you like it, I'll finish it up. For the singing, I thought it might be cool to start out the first verses in a whispery voice and get stronger with every line, at the peak it is almost yelling...kinda Rammstein like, but I guess this suits the feeling of the song.
Okay, here is the trial version for ya:
BALLAD BY PLAYBAHNOSH
Oh, and I own copyright on that one...just for the record

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So, whaddya think?