please try and make one so i can see if it will be better, although I might probably remain at my current technique because in the end the lines are supposed to be gone at all.i just need to work on my contrast untill then.

k:
in the end(after i study hard and buy a graphic tablet) i hope to achieve this kind of result..of corse it's just a dream for the moment...(picture taken from
http://www.goodbrush.com)