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[Iowa]

I must say, Wolf, you're poem is quite nice! k:

I'm back to my old computer and can upload...which i'll do in a bit here, but first some issues.

Actually, all my poems have a set rhythym and none stray from it, I know that in a few lines it's forced, but if you play around a bit, you'll find it! Also, it's really not that I don't trust you, or that i'm paranoid or anything...but I really don't like giving out my age...all I can tell you is that i'm probably younger than you are.

Solitary Unraveling

I don’t care anymore
The world’s collapsed around me
I don’t care anymore
You stupid beasts astound me.
You live your lives in freedom
You’re slaves to nobeast’s paw
And yet you’re still complaining
And slaying minds of all.
For I am death,
Eternal fate,
Darkness fallen,
Open hellgate.
Bleed your death upon me
For my life is truly gone
I’m lost amidst the sorrow and sins
That the world’s based upon
And yet I linger,
Black and still
Eclipsed from sun
By heaven’s hill.
A broken mirror,
A fallen tear,
These words they are my guide
For no one but damned hellion,
Are with me at my side
Together we will conquer,
Kill and set things right
If we can’t escape from this,
You’ll never see the light
For only dark will hide the thoughts of death by one’s own paw
And never again will be unleashed
You’ll follow no one’s law!
By thy paw and by thy sword, we’ll set the demons free
And torch the live oppression
Till the time of eternity.
And with the knowledge
Sunken deep within your rotting mind,
You’ll follow me,
Eternally
And slaughter all the kind
The ones that think they help the world
But really only stain it
The ones who think they set it free
But really only tame it.
By dark, by night
You’ll show your might
You and I, we’ll set things right!
We’ll turn around and run no more,
We’ll kill from bloody shore to shore
We’ll march right up to heaven’s door,
And throw the angels on the floor.
And with this final action bold,
The pain will finally be no more.