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[ReamusLQ]

So there's this site called Rating Poems.com where you read poems people have submitted and rate them. They are hilariously horrible. Find your most favorite awful one, stop wretching your guts out, and post it here for all of us to enjoy and mock


FROM ONE END TO ANOTHER

As I begin my journey to the valley of death,
I start to feel the pain my departure has hath'.

I look behind me and witness the epitome of sorrow,
Upon realizing how much life truly is hollow.

All my life my priority was nothing but to crave,
Yet now all I await is my dark and cold grave.

I know that as my last pulse left my heart,
Their feelings were shattered and torn apart.

Leaving my loved ones and turning back to my path,
Suddenly the feeling of sadness turns in wrath.

Watching them is hard,with sorrow in their eyes,
But I weep for them for all their pitifull lies.

For I know that behind all those tears,
Lies an abyss full of sins and fears.

Tis' this very wrath that led to my ending,
All my life searching, looking for transcending.

Meeting the angel of death he asks me to follow,
Without a choice I agree adding to his sinister wallow.

The angel of death trusts his hand to lead me,
I take hold of it feeling a slight uneasy.

With eyes of fire,smile of pure evil delight,
The angel of death tells me of my final plight.

Finally I see the fallen one glowing with such radiance,
Looking gleefully at me with a sight of utmost pestilence.

With a look of despair and dismay I am bound by chains,
Suddenly feeling hate and pain running through my veins.

I am thrown into a feeling of absolute abyss,
Every second being robbed of all my bliss.

And thus, I am lead to an end to my painfull quest,
Forever stirring in anger and pain without rest.