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(Our story begins in a black, shadowy world. There is mist and smoke coming from up the ground. It is black all around. There are barely audible moans coming from all over. Suddenly, two human forms appear. They are both in their teens. They are male and female. One is a fifteen-year-old girl named Alexandra, who is wearing a green bathing suit with black wrestling suits and biker shorts. The male, whose name is Chris, has black hair and is wearing only corduroy pants and black wrestling boots.)
Alexandra: Well, Chris. What do you think of the afterlife? Chris: (Annoyed and yelling) Can’t these deadheads shut up!? Alexandra: Deal with it. We are going to be here forever! Chris: (Angrily) FOREVER!!!? Alexandra: (sadly) Yes! Chris: Sorry! It is just that after the battle with Shinobi…….. Alexandra: And after my battle with Trini Kwan, I learned true regret. At my actions, everything! Chris: How did you die? Me, beaten to death by Shinobi. Alexandra, Broken neck from being thrown over the top rope and face first onto the floor. Chris: As I said before, I was pummeled to death. Alexandra: Sergeant Kelly did not help you? Neither did Dean? Oh, and that is what you get for killing the brother of a ninja. Chris: No. They were knocked out! Laura especially hates me, you know! But, she helps me! Sometimes! Alexandra: Wonder if they are dead. Chris: When I first discovered that I died, Dean, Laura, and Sergeant Kelly were getting back off. And Shinobi was pinning me. Alexandra: I was just thrown over the top rope and onto the unprotected concrete floor face-first. My neck snapped, killing me instantly. Chris: (Cringing) What a way to go! Alexandra: Yours was more gory! (Chris and Alexandra start walking together. They eventually stop at the bank of a glowing black river.) Alexandra: Ever since I first started coming, I would for a bit stand at the bank of this river and watch how many souls are ferried across this river by Charon. Chris: How long you been dead for? Alexandra: I don’t know. I am guessing around a few hours. Time stops when you are dead. Chris: When you first die…… It is like, really weird. Alexandra: Death hurts the non-repentant. (In the distance, a shadowy figure starts to approach from the river. It looks brownish in color. The figure eventually reveals to be a boat with ghostly figures inside. One figure, who is as black as the background, is rowing the boat. The boat arrives at the shore and the ghostly figures disembark from the boat.) Alexandra: That’s Charon. And those are the new arrivals. Chris: I can see that! Alexandra: I just come here to reflect. Chris: Reflect on what? Alexandra: Reflect on my life. The bad things I have done. Chris: You reflect? Alexandra: Once you die, it is too late. Chris: Tell that to Mark Calloway. Alexandra: There is no reincarnation. Calloway’s will was so strong that he refused to come. He just wanted revenge on Basho. Chris: (Sarcastically) Well, this ain’t heaven! I’ll tell you that! Alexandra: No sarcasm! It is true! Chris: (Annoyed) I know that! Alexandra: We are also judged. (Sadly) Never to see the sweet light…….. Chris: Never to know the good times….. But wait! There are memories! Alexandra: (Confused) Huh? Chris: I have learned that if people keep remembering you, in a way, you are still alive in that world. Alexandra: I don’t think I like the direction this is going! Chris: (Grinning evilly) Eventually, some fanatic will want to bring me back with some spell or something! AND THEN! I CAN GET REVENGE ON SHINOBI!! Alexandra: (Walking away) You are going against God! I can see that you have not repented, even in death. I will have nothing more to do wit you until you come to your senses. (Alexandra disappears into the mist. Chris looks at the river for a bit, then up at the sky. He then turns to the camera and smirks evilly. The mist eventually disappears and the screen fades to black.) |
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22-01-2005, 11:52 PM
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Tip for the future: This could have been posted in the same place as the screenplay, moving that item back to the top of the list and saving this rather pointless topic which will probably be closed or moved or something fairly soon!
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22-01-2005, 11:58 PM
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Merged them instead, but take note of Cheese-dudes comment
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22-01-2005, 11:59 PM
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This could also have been posted in the art forum, even though the art forum appears to the casual observer to be dedicated to the visual arts.
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22-01-2005, 11:59 PM
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23-01-2005, 12:03 AM
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Yes and that's fine - but you could have put your "What did you think?" post as a reply to the screenplay and then it wouldn't have created a new topic! Which keeps the forum tidier. Don't worry about it, Titan has stuck them together for you this time, just try and remember next time! |
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23-01-2005, 12:48 PM
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I think this topic should be in arts forum! (we already discussed this before!)
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23-01-2005, 02:05 PM
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A new thread has been created for the purpose.
you can post your screenplay in The Abandonia Writing Society |
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