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![]() So there's this site called Rating Poems.com where you read poems people have submitted and rate them. They are hilariously horrible. Find your most favorite awful one, stop wretching your guts out, and post it here for all of us to enjoy and mock
FROM ONE END TO ANOTHER As I begin my journey to the valley of death, I start to feel the pain my departure has hath'. I look behind me and witness the epitome of sorrow, Upon realizing how much life truly is hollow. All my life my priority was nothing but to crave, Yet now all I await is my dark and cold grave. I know that as my last pulse left my heart, Their feelings were shattered and torn apart. Leaving my loved ones and turning back to my path, Suddenly the feeling of sadness turns in wrath. Watching them is hard,with sorrow in their eyes, But I weep for them for all their pitifull lies. For I know that behind all those tears, Lies an abyss full of sins and fears. Tis' this very wrath that led to my ending, All my life searching, looking for transcending. Meeting the angel of death he asks me to follow, Without a choice I agree adding to his sinister wallow. The angel of death trusts his hand to lead me, I take hold of it feeling a slight uneasy. With eyes of fire,smile of pure evil delight, The angel of death tells me of my final plight. Finally I see the fallen one glowing with such radiance, Looking gleefully at me with a sight of utmost pestilence. With a look of despair and dismay I am bound by chains, Suddenly feeling hate and pain running through my veins. I am thrown into a feeling of absolute abyss, Every second being robbed of all my bliss. And thus, I am lead to an end to my painfull quest, Forever stirring in anger and pain without rest. |
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![]() Worst poetry...
Beans, beans, the musical fruit. The more you eat, the more you'll... |
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![]() these are worse man...like this one...
I stick this pen to the paper Soon enough I start to write It's my release from all the pain I have Before I sleep at night I write about my feelings Or the thoughts I have to say I write so I can wish to fade Or maybe to live another day You may think my poetry is a bore Maybe it is not your taste But I write for me and not for you For the self problems that I face I write about almost everything About the words my tongue can't heave I write so that my heart can ease So I may rid myself of grieve My poems may begin with a thought Or maybe a horrible sight Most of the time one may write About what they dream at night But I am not a pleasant person Perfect looks they may deceive I write about the things I hide Things that maybe I should conceive My soul bleeds through each pen One by one they slowly leak I write so I can rid my feelings I write because I'm weak Never once did I want to write Where a thought won't cross my mind I write so I can wipe my tears And possibly leave my fears behind If I never met kind people here Who are there to catch me when I fall my mind would not be forming words And I wouldn't be standing tall I write because when I am down I can always pick up a pen and start to Jot down all my feelings So that I won't look back again I write because I wish to write It's another hobby on the list By far it is a better release Then trying to slit my wrists I'm sorry if I don't write like you About those starry skies above Every person has a unique taste And mine is not of lust or love For I write because it is my fuel My fire to try and live strong If you think it is because I want attention My fellow poet you are wrong If I go a day without a poem My soul may not feel at peace I write because it is like my sun It is only the best release I write because it is a Passion Anytime I don't care when Ill get a book and begin to write With thoughts leaking through my pen And I will never stop this hobby Until the day my soul ignites With peace for the rest of my years Until then I will always write I don't know about YOU guys, but my tongue has not ONCE, in my ENTIRE LIFE, heaved, nor have I ever felt grieve (unless you count those ancient metal boots Knights wore into battle to protect their feet...) |
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![]() Just try some Vogon poetry...
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![]() Ah man, that's just plain torture :P
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![]() Quote:
green ferrets line the midnight sky like wandering, as they fly why do these ferrets fly so far fly faster than I do in a car many people hate the little ferrets hate the ferrets hate the ferrets fly little ferrets fly, fly away |
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![]() Who writes this stuff?
It's atrocious. Being a writer myself it makes me gag.
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![]() If cats were little people
in fluffy little suits I think my cat would be your mom :blink: |
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![]() If your ugly and you know it clap your hands
If your ugly and you know it clap your hands If your ugly and you know it and you really want to show it If your ugly and you know it clap your hands Now, copy and change ugly to stupid, etc. If you want to see better poetry, see the links Poems and Doubler's Writings under Art. |
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