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[TheChosen]

I have been a comic maker since the first class. And now, from stick figures, fonts and sprites, I have moved into toys!


(To be continued!)

What do you think?

[wendymaree]

I think Star Wars eat your heart out

Seriously, nice combination of figure perspective and dialogue.

[Tito]

Reminds me of this, a web that I love, but seems to be way more serious. I've always liked this kind of thing, using little models or figures to build up stories. Maybe you could work a bit more on the setting, that fruit basket isn't appropiate at all.

[Dave]

ahahaha very nice! LOL

[TheChosen]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Tito @ Apr 14 2007, 01:05 PM) [snapback]286968[/snapback]</div>

Maybe you could work a bit more on the setting, that fruit basket isn't appropiate at all.[/b]

Naaw. Theyre toys. They dont need no specific setting. It would be totally different thing If I'd use painted scenery or something like that.

Next three page's!







Notes:

The dinosaur torture is something I planned, but I later removed it from the script. The dinosaur, however, can be seen on a one screen and on a failed picture (Il show it to you later).

If you havent noticed yet, the events are taking place in my kitchen.

There was supposed to be more scoping on fourth page, but I scrapped the idea, since making that binocular-trick is sloooow.

Oh, does the name's of the Stf-Team sound familiar? Or the word "Arwing"? I'l tell you later why If you can tell me where did I took those name's.

The doctor Reamus was named after ReamusLQ. No reason whatsoever.

Colonel Simmons is named after a professional wrestler, Ron Simmons (a.k.a Farooq).

Bonus/Failed pics:



This is the failed picture (The real one is on page 2) where Emperor is looking at the kitchen. My mom can be seen on the picture and that black thing is my t-shirt.



This is the refridgerator which Peppy mentions on fourth page. This was supposed to be viewed with binoculars.

Stay tuned for next pages!

[Japo]

The characters are blurry. The camera's optics can't manage to focus at so short a distance, look how the more distant fruits and so are better defined. You could take the photos from a minimal distance and then chop the part that interest you in your computer, I don't know.

[wendymaree]

I like where you're going with this, Chosen. The suspense is building nicely. I want to read on to find out more. The binocular effect was well done. Also like the angles you shoot from...adds to the drama and the story. Some moments of humour worked well, e.g., when you brought in aspects of the real world setting combined with the imaginary characters, e.g. Lt. Peppy exclaiming that 'Even the fridge is heavily guarded,' really made me smile.

[Quintopotere]

Nice idea!
It has just two downsides: 1) your camera can't manage photos so nearly taken, so it cames all too blurry
2) There is too drama for a toys story (for my tastes), it needs more irony...

[Narmie]

I think it's really good, apart from blurriness, see if you can take the photos from further away and zoom in. Apart from that it's looking great and I can't wait for another episode.